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| Adenil 2008-04-04 ch 1, | Wow. Shocking, and a little confusing. I read through a few times and it doesn't really make sense until the end. And even then, not so much. Where did you get that title? Love it anyway, especially the repetition of the 'concrete' and its rhymes. |
| MissMuse 2008-03-28 ch 1, | Sounds a bit like a Nostradamus quatrain. Is this all concrete as the Saboteurs arrive? |
| fatbird33 2008-03-26 ch 1, | fantastic flow! |