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Reviews For: Convex and Concave

Adenil
2008-04-04
ch 1,
Wow. Shocking, and a little confusing. I read through a few times and it doesn't really make sense until the end. And even then, not so much. Where did you get that title?
Love it anyway, especially the repetition of the 'concrete' and its rhymes.
MissMuse
2008-03-28
ch 1,
Sounds a bit like a Nostradamus quatrain. Is this all concrete as the Saboteurs arrive?
fatbird33
2008-03-26
ch 1,
fantastic flow!
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