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| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusei love your 2nd verse. |
| Thomicas 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem, but you should have called it "My Heart's Shape Is A Star", as this is what you use in the poem. It doesn't really do any good changing the perspective for the title. Having that said: Very well done and original. Keep it up! ~Thomicas |
| In the Rye 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. "my fingers twitch with anxiousness/or maybe unhappiness" i really liked this line |