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Needa S
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully done! Maybe you could check out my story "Blessings" sometime. Any suggestions is appreciated. Do keep writing you are very talented. Thanks for adding me to your Fav's list. God Bless you.
The-Dreams-of-Emma-Michele
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseMy favorite lines in this poem:

"they started as two, but ended as one."

how true will that be
when you and I are married?
as we start as four
Throught Christ we will become
something more...
Two lives
Twice as strong

-Emmi

(now tommy is a crack head)
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