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| PrincessPeaches 2008-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseoh wow! That is so powerful! I love it!! |
| The-Dreams-of-Emma-Michele 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseGigi! I love this poem (always have). What it says to me is that everything in this world is unpredictable, nothing can be for certain except for one thing. That thing is love. (God is love!) -Emmi |
| Fyxthamnzwik 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this one, but here's something you might consider: the love lives, crushes die is a duality, as you know. honest/liar, faithful/cheater, winter/summer are all also dualities I would suggest associating all references of one of the characters to one side of the duality and the other character to the other. this will draw a clear theme that one person is in love while the other is merely infatuated. it'll hit home with many people because all of us often feel that passion in relationships can be lopsided. : ) |
| Gabbyretro 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusepretty cool words. ilike. |