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| chocolaterain 2008-09-21 ch 2,  | abuseplease update this story as well! i really like this idea to. also please update the blind story. thank you so much for writing you stories they bring a smile to my face. thank you! |
| Sebastian Osprey 2008-09-07 ch 2, | abuseSax. He is such a sax sort of person. And cute, too, if I'm catching the correct vibes... Osprey |
| Lieutenant Starshine 2008-09-07 ch 2, | abuseSaxophone is infinitely cooler. Have him play that. This story's adorable. Love it. Can't wait for more. |
| Silencia 2008-08-20 ch 2, | abuseLove ıt!! I was wonderıng when you'd contınue thıs story! And I thınk a saxophone ıs perfect for Jasper!! |
| JoiZ. D 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseOo-kay... That was weird. Well, sort of. But even so, I love Ashling's ability! Good work on the story!! hope you update soon! |
| BookBug 2008-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abusevery interesting but surprise ending write more! |
| ForeverxDreaming 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuse*Smiles* Cute! I really like Ashling. The ending was a little... strange... anyway. But nice job! -Dreamer |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusewhoa, ineteresting. i'm all for anything involving romance, so have at it. i'll read :) |
| misery sister 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseGood story so far! Keep it up! :D Very original idea! :D |
| Sebastian Osprey 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuselol, Alanna immediate awed reaction is well done. I can just see the expression on her face... |
| vaudeville summers 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseAha neither was I ^^ Love your plot to pieces. It's very original...I can't remember seeing anything like it on here. Plus, I think the fact that you use correct spelling and grammar also puts you above a lot of the authors on here...xD Well, except, when you say "We lived in British Columbia," She said. The "she" in "she said" doesn't need to be capitalized. Ah, sorry for my atrocious punctuation problems. Anyway, loved it, update soon! ~DeAnna |
| Silencia 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseo.0 Mistress?!? update soon! I want to know what happens! |