|Reviews for Filthy|
| Detective R 7/2/12 . chapter 1
Nice! Very thought-provoking.
| In State of Agony 4/2/08 . chapter 1
filthy?...i can relate, good flow, "the meaning of being strong it's pretend to be strong"...is so true.
do you speak spanish by the way?
This world is ((In State Of Agony))
| Pairou 3/26/08 . chapter 1
Ohh, I like this... Yes I do.
| simpleplan13 3/26/08 . chapter 1
-You finished to confess... finished confessing
-I don't believe a bullshit... Either you think it's bullshit or you dont believe this billshit. Im nto 100% sure what you meant here.
-it are pulled than when it are stabbed... they not it
I liked this... the part about indifference and different was a nice play on words and I also like the ending. Two things... I got confused with the he, she and you also the poisoned line and the three lines after that confused me because I wasnt sure what they were about. Other than that really nice job.
| vaudeville summers 3/26/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this really made me think.
It's inspiring and I adore...well, I was going to say I adored the second half, but I like the first half as well...
Anyways, my favorite line is definitely "Some people carries masks until the day they die then how can you be sure"
A few grammar problems, I'm not sure if they were intentional.
"Carries" should be "carry",
"it are pulled than when it are stabbed" should be "they are pulled than when they are stabbed"?
"keeping silence" sounds like it should be "keeping silent"?
I don't know. Love it very much.