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| robertrehcra 2008-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseA little confusing. Well written but at times far to unclear. I like the way you write but I think it goes a little beyond my ability to read and comprehend. I really like how you depicted the mans life and how he was depressed. I find mundane very hard to pull off and you did just that. |