Once again sad . . . it has quite a few grammar and spelling problems, other than that good . . . as always . . . .

Quite a good story, though sometimes the story moved alittle fast and was slightly confusing. Try proof reading and building up the characters more. Original Idea too. Very, very good try though!

It was good. I liked the plot, but your grammar could use some work.

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