-cocksheadtotheside- This seriously reminds me of the short story, The Yellow Wallpaper...that was a horrible story.

Bit i like this, even if it is a bit creepy.

And I know what you mean by you can't stop writing. I can't either, though my work will never be good.

I'm jelous of all these talented people on here.

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haha your really working with this!

Wow...beautiful!

The ending is magnificent! The flow is perfect and the idea of something so beautiful being naughty. I have the image of harpies or sirens.

So much praise to you, again!