wow, that was simply amazing. I'd love to read more of your stories.(:

beautiful, i loved it

That was beautiful...tremendously, powerfully beautiful. I have absolutely nothing against it, except for it being so sad and at the same time so comforting. Reading this warmed my heart.

that was undoubtebly awesome =]

beautiful. just beautiful. there's nothing else i can say.

I really liked this version A LOT. It's so sweet...and I love the ending. You made it perfect. I'm impressed. It left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling.

But, one thing I would change is in the 3rd paragraph is 'shoeless feet' to toes.

:) Hope to see more soon!