Reviews for d i v e and s u b m u r g e

Creative Jenius 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseFirstly, I like that you captured the idea of drowning. I don't know why, but I do. I would like it more if it didn't sound so welcomed. When I think of drowning, I think more of an almost passive acceptance, since drowning is slow. But this is me. Secondly, I would rather die by water than fire, because ... well, I guess because it would feel so serene in comparison to blazing to death.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseInteresting poem! I'm curious about the format, such as the way you typed out 'struggling' and the bolding. As to your question, I think I would prefer a water death, mainly because I have a slight paranoia of fire/things catching fire. =X I don't like heat, either, and being burned alive would be much more painful.