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| AubriannaKnight 2008-09-17 ch 6,  | abuseSo far I'm liking this version a bit more than the first. It's a lot different. Can't wait to see what happens. |
| Oyoa 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseLove. ^^ And yes, yes I do. *wink* |
| Oyoa 2008-05-06 ch 5, | abuse*SQUE* I LOVE Euric! *SQUE* |
| Vanilla Nitemare 2008-05-05 ch 5, | abuseThis is your little sissy talking, and you know that must mean I'm reading this, and you know that must mean that if you don't write chapter six RIGHT NOW LITTLE SISSY SHALL ATTACK WITH MUTANT GREEN RABBITS AND EAT YOU! WRITE WRITE WRITE:-D Shimo |
| Earyende 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseOmg, This story is awesome. for one thing you take stereotypes like being goth or gay/lesbian and write a story that makes them seem llike real people and you totally blow of the stereotypes, i like that it means you have your own opinions not just the ones others tell you to have. Thats always an important trait in any writer who hopes to be sucessful. And then again you go against the norm by writing a vampire story with a sexy vampire and plain girl but you dont do the usual love/lust scenario that is very popular instead the vampire's role is uncertain, is he the antagonist? or a protagonist. and with the question of 'How does Justin fit into it all?' you've got me hooked. Please write more as soon as you are able!! |
| iloveme5895 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abusei like cant wait 4 more *~ashley~* |
| Zegram 2008-04-30 ch 4, | abuseGood stuff, hope to see some Jiffy next chapter to relieve the tension a bit. XD |
| Oyoa 2008-04-17 ch 3, | abuse*SQUEE!* Take that back! Give me Justin instead! (NOT as a brother.) Actually, if I think about it, I can have BOTH... heh heh heh. Next chapter por favor! (Totally Filipino, yet I use Spanish... go me!) |
| Oyoa 2008-04-17 ch 2, | abuseI should read those books.. .any romance with them vampires in it? *wink* Sorry, I'm in the mood for that type right now.. and maybe you'll story will fulfill it! *wink* We'll find out! ;P I want a Vinny. He's actually a cool younger brother. You know what... I want an OLDER brother like Vinny! That would be awesome! |
| Oyoa 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseXD! Jiffy is awesome!... yet, I'm glad I sure don't have anyone to drag me around like that... Especially in pink. pink+me= enemies. Jennifer.. .*laughs* |
| Zegram 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty interesting, well written and all of that. Good job. |
| Fm Radio 2008-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI totally forgot to add this in my other review! I miss the Halloween bashing. A lot. I personally love Halloween, but i really enjoyed the bashing. Please add it to the next chapter. PLEASE!! |
| FM Radio 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuse*GHIZASP* No reviews?! *ghizasps again* That simply won't do! I love Jiffy! "'This doesn’t change a god damned thing,' she said. 'My parents are still going, I’m still throwing the party and you’re going to get laid even if I have to rape you. You will lose your virginity before the year is up.'" is such a hilarious line! I love it! Although her parents decision is pretty stupid if you ask me. I like this way of introducing Vinny better. I also like how you didn't just jump into the party scene, like you did last time. This helps us get to know the characters a little better. Anyhow, update soon! :) And make sure to have fun with all your lead males, or lead females if you swing that way *wiggles eyebrows suggestively* |