Good job at describing the hugs and how they make you feel. Nice poem.

~Twilight Starr~

Awesome.
I know the feeling.

You inspire me, Sweets!
-pockets

I understand what your saying here. And i can totally relate. Nice job.


XKristie MarieX

My real brothers warm yet detached,...brother's
My boys an awkward pat on the back,...boy's


I like the repetition... it's nice and all the examples you give are great too, but my favorite part was how you described it as melting into him. That was beautiful.

Aw...

I don't know what to say, it's so heartbreaking but cute.

-stix-

that was absolutely ADORABLE.

i like it its well done. but from time to time the rythem gets off... but very good over all :)

Ok, sorry, I really dont know anything about this at all (I dont hug people... or touch people). But Why would ANYONE hate you? It is not your fault they dont satisfy what you want to feel.