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| capricioso 2008-03-27 ch 1,  | abusei have a starnge feeling that i do know this jonathan. or at least, from your blog. aside from that, i really like this poem. its powerfully moving, even though its short. you can sort of feel the emotions radiating from the lines. okay, so maybe that was exaggerated, but yeah, its something along those lines. good work! its one of the better ones i've read from you. compare it to some of the first pieces you posted here, like 'beautiful', and you'll find yourself one very contented girl. |
| freakyAngel 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Short and simple, but full of emotion. |