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| :) 2008-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abusea bit too wordy at times, but improving somewhat. i think your story writing is alright, but perhaps you should work more on your poetry writing because it seems as if your poems are simply your thoughts, with unnaturally stuck in literary devices such as rhymes and iambic pentameters. |