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| SaMDR 2008-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseLol I liked it, specially the whole Gabbana boy introduction at the beginning. It was very well written and interesting. =D |
| d666lisa 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAnother excellent oneshot :) |
| Gaebrielle Shai 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHaha, very cute. It brought a smile to my face and even made me laugh, which is difficult to do with written words. I do wish I had seen her friends' reactions, but that's just because I'm a curious person. :) |
| x3life 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseaww this was cute!! =) |
| Jevanminx 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI love her, shes quite like me as my friends tell me I'm a cold hearted **. So yeah, good story. JM |
| Midnight Heaven 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! I am able to empathize with Amber easily since we are so much alike. Great Job! =D |
| NNOOOLEEAAAVVVEEE 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseCUTE! :):):) |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseUhm... I like 'gabbana boy'. But it's a tad unrealistic, don cha think?! Oh hell, I like it all the same. |
| found.eventually 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I don't really understand why people would assume that single women would just have to live with cats. Cats are scary, to tell the truth. This was good. :) I think the main character is a tad bit bitchy (cough, cough), but oh, hell, who cares, she got the man! Amen to that. HAHA. Whee! Another good one-shot! |
| Cortney 2008-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very cute, fluffy little story that made me smile. The beginning was a bit...unimaginative, so at first I wasn't sure I wanted to keep reading. I'm glad I did, though, because the end result was lighthearted and while perhaps not the most plausible or original of ideas, it was still a nice ending. |
| starlit x sky 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseAww. I loved it! Great job |
| Limera 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseHey, hey =) Pretty nice, overall. A bunch of grammar issues, but the storyline flows really well :) |
| RoseLife 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusenaww cuute! nice work ^^ |
| NoieD 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseCute! I like heroine's who aren't sugary! How about a sequel; I'll bet they could have some amusing conversations even as a couple. |
| EmotionalTrauma 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAs always, lovely. Biohazard |