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tomato-greens 2008-03-27 . chapter 1
Hello! This is interesting and uncomfortable and I like it, all things said. But it's "silhouetted," not "sillueted," just so you know. :)

Also, while Un Lun Dun is fine for the China MiƩville novel, I would encourage you to think of another name--even just something as simple as "Un Done." Of course, I am terrible with titles, but the similarity threw me off a little.
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