...well take me sideways. That was incredible. Your imagery, metaphors, and...just...plot were sublime. I have no criticisms at all. That was fantastic.

Victor...*shakes head*...oh, Victor.

Dude, this is awesome.
It's got a lovely feel to it- grimy and ephemeral and such like.

This isn't normally my cup of tea, but your story was beautifully written. I especially liked the way you likened Elliot to the sheets that Victor had so easily manipulated just hours before.

Bravo. Keep on writing. (:
r@sn