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Reviews For: Hold On

Jerry W. Patton
2008-03-28
ch 3, anon.
abuseWhat a great story! I can't wait until the finale or second half! Again, a fantastic story!
SKOoLGuRLWiTGiGZ
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseumm yea this iz anotha storie by ma bestie so yea its good...umm yea...erribodi should read it...i didn't see nuthn yuu needed to improve...umm yea...aye we should go shoppin i gotz money...!! yay!! haha=]
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