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| right2reality 2008-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseA unique and beautiful twist to a common cliché- great haiku! Keep up the good work! -right2reality |
| Dormio 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's so beautiful. Keep up the good work! |
| Calidris alba 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusewhoever the haiku is meant for should feel very happy. that is a beautiful comparison. very unique. |
| FoxTail13 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abusecute and romantic. i like how you compare a person's eyes to saturn's ice rings. clever and creative. i like your writing, by the way. |