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| piemage 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuseYay, I found your story! There's just a few things wrong. There's some typos with random letters stuck in words. It's still readable, just annoying. You should avoid using exclamation marks in the main text, they should really only be for dialog. The constant point of view changes are a bit disorienting. Anyway, I love the characters and the fight scenes are great. Good story! |
| Joshua Thorson 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abuseYes, this is fanfiction. I'd suggest moving this to - I believe they have a specific category just for Guild Wars. |
| Heatless Flame 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseHmm interesting but rather short. I wanna see more before I pass judgement. |