Haha! Brilliant! I loved it!

Good story! Really funny with the "Anti-Sue" stuff.

Oh my! That was hilarious.

Anti-Sue as well as Mary Sue...
I like how you made them treat her as if she was one of those evil spirits. I guess they are...

My friend writes Mary Sues. Know the Anti-Sue helpline?

Be gone, Sue, be gone! Lovely. (:

That was really wierd but amusing.I like how you had them banashing the Mary Sue spirit giving them a proper character. Mary Sue characters are so irritating.

Haha! I love the author's voice in this, and the way the story seems to go from place to place. Clever. (:

I also like how 'Mary Sue' is like some sort of devil that invades characters' bodies.

A few things I noticed:
'The voice voice let out something' - delete one 'voice'.
'like a discontent grunt' - discontented?

Awesome idea, and an enjoyable read!