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MagdalenaSnow 2008-08-05 . chapter 1
this one really got to me, because I've been in a lot of weddings recently.
I LOVE this idea.
My favorite part, though, is this:

When you stumble over simple communication,

You are doing too much talking

Perhaps even,

Too much listening

And not enough looking.


Awesome job.
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