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| Frog Tongue 2008-04-02 ch 1,   | Remember I said I didn't like this? Well I changed my mind. After a couple rereadings, I've decided I like it. . "I exhale, I let go, I dive in, I learn, I throw, I board, I stay (liked that stanza), I leave, I play, I nod." . Brava. Nice incorporation of elements. I'll say it is a bit confusing though. Still, very nice. |