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Reviews For: The Pain of a Kiss

Lurid Black
2008-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseRandomly taking a break... then returning to read something like this makes me happy =]
And I like how the main theme of the poem is used at the very end.
Keep it up!
Laurena
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusedude i love ur style! everything is leading to the end, the last line, its amazing, u have the best endings, pain of a kiss! its wonderful! most people (including myself) never kno how to ends things, i finally realized why i love ur writing so much, it satisfies me, i never feel like u left something unsaid, bravo! and im still waiting for my love poem ;D
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