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| Joe Smith 2008-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one a lot. Its depressing, but it makes you pay attetion. Your poems are all very deep in nature, smalls. |
| Lurid Black 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseLines like 'Into a simple black oblivion' entwined with descriptions always increase the feel of the poem, and this obviously used great detail. |
| Laurena 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseo memoir of a drunk, i like the ending, god i wish i had ur passion!! billy u amaze me ;) |