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| LillySananger 2008-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseI believe that this needs a little work however you have clearly displayed your feelings. I feel that this site needs to show that there are versus because it adds to the experience of reading. Sometimes it's easier to read one way than another. One of my favorite poems has spaces littered trough out the page. Try making different styles of writing. That my opinion not you fault. |