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| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abusehahah it was fast enough =] wow erys does have a lot of control over alot of ppl. =0 when r u gonna tell us her past?!?!?! please update soon |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-05-12 ch 18, | abuseHUG! *attacking hug* Tee hee :) Yes, it sucks. But it's not unrequited anymore... :) -xM~C~Wx |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-05-07 ch 16, | abuseaw well i can wait. but just dont take long. damn so many secrets r coming out! =0 please update soon =] |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-05-06 ch 16, | abuseYou're due for your hug! *hugs* YAY! Wow, I did? Hmm...watch when the explanation comes I won't get it and then I'll have a huge epiphany and say "Oh! I get it now" and everybody else will have gotten it three days before that. Lol. Poor Max. I know the feeling...and it sucks. Can't wait to read the next chock-full-of-mystery update! -xM~C~Wx |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-05-03 ch 14, | abuseahh now i get it. but why does cyan get so mad quickly he shouldnt be like that to caitlyn.after all shes trying to help him. thoguh i would be jealous of erys too. heck i do feel jealous since shes so perfect and crap poor caitlyn =[ well please update soon cant wait for more chapters :DD |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-05-02 ch 14, | abuseTee hee yes I do! *hugs* YAY! Hmm...Erys is a human lie detector...and Cyan is still in love with her. Interesting. And why do I get the feeling that Cyan's not being entirely truthful about his "affair" with Astrid?? So many more problems to wrap my mind around... -xM~C~Wx |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-04-29 ch 13, | abuseah wat did erys mean by that of "...and ur not a very good lier"?!?!!??!?! oh well ill just have to wait. dont take too long. and please please update soon! :D |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-04-28 ch 13, | abuseOh good. Guess what? You get another hug. *hugs* Yay! Hm, wonder how that play will turn out...Can't wait to read more! And good, I'm not slow...:) -xM~C~Wx |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-04-24 ch 12, | abuseaw they set him up! as much as i ahte to say this because she just got into the sory, i dont think erys is good. >.< but caitlyn is going to b hearbroken! =[ thats so sad. man please update soon =] |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-04-24 ch 12, | abuseThere's no such thing as too many hugs. But I can give you less bone-crushing ones...*hugs you with less force* Oh yay, that chapter cleared up so much! Why Astrid hates Caitlyn, Cyan vs. Emily, the whole bit. Now I don't feel so slow in understanding these things... :) Till next chapter (and next hug), -xM~C~Wx |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-04-24 ch 11, | abuseHmm...interesting. More characters=lots more explained apparently, but SO MANY MORE MYSTERIES...sigh. Mysteries in a story are what make the noveling world go round though. -xM~C~Wx |
| xMy-Chemical-Writingx 2008-04-19 ch 10, | abuseSUFFOCATION! Watever. *hugs you again* Yay! Eleanor explained...kind of. Still don't know why she has such a problem with Cyan...hopefully will be covered in next chapter *puppy eyes* PWEEz? Hmm..most important character...IS IT ROBIN HOOD??! Ha sorry sidetracked there for a second...more soon! -xM~C~Wx |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-04-18 ch 10, | abuseElla doesnt seem so bad. maybe thats just her way she is,like making fun of ppl but dont really mean it.,or mean it rite now but not later on. im so curious of wat that secret everyones talking about!ah get it out.get it out! ...and update soon =] |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-04-18 ch 9, | abusehaha thanks =] hm...well i dont think he would but at the same time i do think he would.ah please update soon. and dont worry ill read and reply =] |
| Kirby Tails 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHa ha. This totally reminds me of my friend Caitlyn; she's into acting and music and all that sort of stuff, so naturally, I just see her face in this. Now to type something helpful... It's better than most of the stuff I've seen on Fictionpress. You don't move as fast as some of the other people do in terms of your details. One of the things that bothers me most about it thuogh is that, ideally, you're supposed to start a new paragraph everytime a new person speaks. you do it most of the time, but there were a few times in this that I noted that. But that's just one of those things that really bothers me, so yeah. :P |