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Reviews For: On the Edge
FoxTail13
2008-03-27
ch 1, 		abuseInspiring!

This piece is moving with a genuine air to it. Most poems or stories that are sad usually end up being shallow or try to welcome pity.

Thankfully, this poem is not so. I like how real the emotion feels and I also love your style.

Great poem.
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