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| weedoutofthepot 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is very nice work. I can imagine how this sounds like although I'm sure it sounds different in my head from how you made it. The lyrics give a sense of the relationship between the macrocosm and the microcosm while at the same time showing the apathy of the whole when it comes to the part. Not really sure if I expressed myself correctly. It's hard to explain. Bottom line is this: you wrote something really good here and you should write more. |
| Tommy Atkins 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abusethat was a phenominal work. i've seldom read anything of yours that hits me that hard. |
| DeeFective 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI really like this song. I just wish you would've made the chorus longer. But still this is actually very nicely written. |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAw sad and amazing! I wish I could hear this being sung! Great job! |
| Something Corporate 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseNice I liked it alot |
| Artemis Anderson 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis...is beautiful. Great job. Kudos |