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Reviews For: If We Die Tonight

weedoutofthepot
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is very nice work. I can imagine how this sounds like although I'm sure it sounds different in my head from how you made it. The lyrics give a sense of the relationship between the macrocosm and the microcosm while at the same time showing the apathy of the whole when it comes to the part. Not really sure if I expressed myself correctly. It's hard to explain. Bottom line is this: you wrote something really good here and you should write more.
Tommy Atkins
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abusethat was a phenominal work. i've seldom read anything of yours that hits me that hard.
DeeFective
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI really like this song. I just wish you would've made the chorus longer. But still this is actually very nicely written.
KatieTheWriter
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseAw sad and amazing! I wish I could hear this being sung! Great job!
Something Corporate
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseNice I liked it alot
Artemis Anderson
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThis...is beautiful. Great job. Kudos
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