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| Reminising Obsession 2008-05-08 ch 8,  | abuseHm,Nice,FINALLY she catches on!Jeez i thought it would take her 4-ever!But still...Oh yea,i liked ur home page.Very pefessional!I wish i could do something so good.*Sigh*Anyway update soon.Ihave no life so feel free.Anytime! |
| tennisxdork. 2008-05-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseah-ha-HA! she knows...ooh, man cameron do a little dance for lily... it's the least a half-naked guy can do. xD midnight must reveal himself to her personally and then devour her lips...0_0 i hope this is what happens in these types of stories... ahha |
| tennisxdork. 2008-05-07 ch 7, anon. | abuseooh julian and sam...characters come into play! :D julian sounds very artsy (: cameron should confess about being the little kitty... lily will just smother him more ;] ohhoho! |
| shirouasgi 2008-05-07 ch 8, | abuseOMG another great story. Keep writing. This one has me sitting on the edge of my seat. |
| Alice B. Black 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI love this story dear, and at the moment I find it far more interesting than Angelic Voice. They're both good, but this one just tops them I think. Sorry for the lack of critisim and just the shout of praise. It's what I'm good at! I'll try to review often, though usually when I read these things I'm in a rush because I'm always busy doing something. Alice |
| Liliana Ortiz 2008-05-07 ch 8, | abuseOoh wow. Just...wow. LOVE the ending to the chapter. It was just...wow. 0.0 |
| xximperfection 2008-05-07 ch 8, | abuseI was looking through FictionPress one night and came across your story. Decided to take a look and I love it. It's very well written and very intriguing. Took me an hour or so to try and pull myself away to go to bed.. Hahaha. For some reason, your story reminds me slightly of Twilight. I'm not sure why, but it does.. That's a good thing. Keep up the good work. ^_^ -Erin |
| Exqusite 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuse=D! I love this story! I just keep loving you more every bit of the seceond...I mean.. in a friendly way.. lol x) Update soon! RAWR~ |
| SimplySweetnSour 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseoh snap this is getting interesting (not to say it wasn't interesting before :P) |
| Jayjack 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseyay! update. oh god. creepy white haired man. |
| bla8 2008-05-06 ch 8, anon. | abuseIntresting. . . I WANNA KNOW MORE, so please update soon (though you're really good about that) |
| midnightbeauty 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseDundundundunn KNEW it!! Oh. I loved this chapter, even though it was a bit upsetting. I found some grammar mistakes, but I don't have time to type them all right now and try to stay in past tense throughout the chapter. Kay, I gotsta go to my detention. UPDATE soon! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| Jevanminx 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseOh creepy, who turned them into feathers then, interesting. Cameron and Lily, poor Lily. JM |
| jenjen-0 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseLol her reaction was funny, just in denial then at the moment? Can't wait for the next update! |
| OhSweetheart 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseYay I guessed right! I can't wait for the story to progress. |