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| aprettywar 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abusethis is very intriguing to me...just the way it moves from thought to thought. i also really like "cool foliage falling from our lips." wonderful poem :) |
| Julius Gillian 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAnother elegant, provacative, graceful, supple, grandiose, extravagant poem written by you in the sum of all that is beautiful in the literary world of poetry :) |
| Kapoo 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI don't normally care for structured poetry but this is really good |