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| Needa S 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome! Write on. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusePretty images. I especially like the line 'The stars wink out', because with your phrasing it's almost as if night is undoing itself. Sorry if that makes no sense, but that's the way I see it. Anywho, awesome job. (: |