Very clever :) So cute. Even though it was short..it had just the right amount of everything. I like the concept of 'internet love' and how she comes alive in the technology world. I think this would be pretty good if you decide to pursue this short fic and make it a full drawn-out story. I would certainly like to read it. This one's going on my favorites! :) -mit

hey! i read your stuff on fanfic and was looking over your profile when i saw the link for your account here. so i checked it out, and lets just say i was not disappointed! looking forward to more!
~Ana (aka:CuzEdwardLikesBrunettes)

interesting...you described the feelings perfectly :)