that was so cute! Very creative, I've never read anything like it.

Whoa . . . well the title describes it well.

It flows nice, and I just like it. I can't pick out why right now, but danm, I like it!


As Always,

Eve

i wouldn't call it humor
but it's pretty damn awesome anyway

Very creative and fun to read. =P

The only mistake I noticed was in the first line, where 'thetown' is mushed together. Other than that, very amusing! I had no trouble following this, regardless of how wacky it became.

Awesome ending line. (: