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| simpleplan13 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not a phoenix in which can reemerge from ashes... you don't need the in I like this.. the images in here with the shadow and the pheonix and the butterfly were really well done. And I also like the beginning to, but they didn't connect all that well. Other than that nicely done. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusegothically (is that a word?) beautiful |