...ew. Scary.
But I like it.

I like your use of imagery and metaphor. The last line was especially powerful, especially how it fit with the third stanza. Actually, the last three lines were just amazing. I think you could have done something different with the first line - I don't have a problem with cursing, but it didn't seem necessary. I got the feeling you were trying to construct a tense mood, but another word could have been more effective.

i love the concept of the rain pounding on one's dreams.

the imagery and word choice in the second stanza is wonderful at evoking a very dark, tense feeling.

"to quell the fear, i conceive poems in my mind."
i like this line, the idea of trying to use words to quell fear. very helpless and it creates a good feeling of this-is-all-i-can-do.

the last line ends it with a bang.

in conclusion,
great poem.

I love the way you structured the verses in a series of incompletes. This poem also created a very specific mood, which I thought was good considering it's length.
Nicely done.