|Reviews for My Words are Cursing You|
| Dani 4/24/08 . chapter 1
I really like this poem! It is really scary and angry. It really conveys a strong feeling of frustration, hurt and anger. I like the talk about ropes, because they are trapping, and you give a very trapped feeling. Clearly you have a lot of pain, hurt and anger. I think you showed how you feel very well.
I like how you wrote "you don't know my anger." When you have a strong feeling like anger hidden, it builds up and builds up, and you eventually just explode. It's great that you write poetry, it's a wonderful outlet.
Good luck and keep writing!