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Reviews For: Last Man Standing

V.R.M.
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseIt caught my interest, and its easy to understand what's going on and also to envision the events. It moved a little to quickly though, if you fluffled it out a bit it would give the reader more of an opportunity to enjoy all the excitement.

I hope you add more soon.
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