I think you should introduce yourself, because from what I'm getting through all of your work I'm reading, you're a wonderful person. :D

I love this song so much. I can definitely see it as like, two polar opposites - either Linkin Park-style rap rock, or a slow, soft electronic song like The Postal Service

I love the first line... the description is beautiful and I like the last line of the first stanza as well.

I like the fairytale thing in contrast with your own lack of fairytale. It was really nice. The rest of it is nice as well.

The only thing I didnt like was some of the word choices seemed a bit weak like "little shy teenager" and "stupid." Also in the first stanza the repetition of guy and then boy wasn't really needed. Other than that it was really awesome.

I thought it was beautiful. Guys are such unbelievable idiots. But you never know, he could be thinking the exact same thing about you. Don't feel discouraged or unnoticed. Or at least try not to. it's no fun. Heh, i would know.

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I thought it was very good! My favorite part was the Chorus because I think that every girl can relate to that, and I like the line "She plays all of the love songs on repeat/Dreaming up the fantasies inside her head." Because I know thats what I do when I have a huge crush on a guy.

In the third stanza (The one about glass slippers/homework) I think maybe it didnt fit the best with the rest of the song.

I really really liked this piece! It was very good! Keep up the good work!

That was catchy and I SO want to HEAR it...especially the musical instruments behind it. i hope you get the guy you're after. Really. Being in love is so, well, dreamy...it's smothering in a good way and it gently supercedes all thought. I remember the feeling and your lyrics placed a rather lopsided grin on my face in memory. If you EVER sold this song, i'd buy it. new fav!

Oh this is actually very cute. And I can totally relate with you and this song. Good job.

It's really good!!
I'd probably call it 'Things Left Unsaid' myself, but that's just me! (Things Left Unsaid is one of the themes in a drabble challenge I'm working on... But that's completely irrelevant...)
Anyway, it's really good! Good job!

U R an awesome writer! you should continue! when u get this message will u reply? thx!

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