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| myturntobebrave 2008-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow, this was good! I mean, really good! Very new, I like it! |
| Xicaulis 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusehell, that was emotional. I CRIED and im NOT the kind of person who CRIES when i read books. That is SCARY for me. Anyway, i didn't catch a single error in this entire composition, except for "You always WAS a naughty girl." but im guessing it was meant to be that way, right? |
| losing gracie girl 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusethis is extremely sad. i was almost crying...which is very unusual when i'm reading. yours until the wind changes, gg |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional. The narration was flawless; you managed to bring the characters to life in a small amount of writing. I actually began to care about their troubles. Excellently done. |