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Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-28 . chapter 1
Beautiful.

I love your phrases here - 'throughout the night I kept nigh from beaming', 'Dew drops sparkle in such a lightning sea'.

My only problem was with 'N’ soon', because somehow the 'n' sat a little awkwardly with me. I guess you did this to suit the flow, though?
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