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| Decoris Verbum 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseFun idea. Another one of those interesting childrens' stories. Good job. |
| Lemina xx 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was funny! :) |
| Maralyn 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThat's a cute story! I liked it. You repeated the first sentence, just so you know. And in the last sentence you said "call" instead of "can". |