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perpetual questions
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusebeautifully real... and really beautiful.
East-0f-Eden
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusebloody brilliant especially the part about the caffine induced haze.
astral boy
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusebeautiful. the idea that lonliness bleaches somebody is as striking as it is true.

yes, i liked it.
theredkatana
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseIt's hard to explain, but...
I've felt this. There's a lot of relevance in this poem, and to use one of your words, yearning. Very good display of full-hearted pain, if that makes any sense.
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