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| perpetual questions 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusebeautifully real... and really beautiful. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusebloody brilliant especially the part about the caffine induced haze. |
| astral boy 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. the idea that lonliness bleaches somebody is as striking as it is true. yes, i liked it. |
| theredkatana 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's hard to explain, but... I've felt this. There's a lot of relevance in this poem, and to use one of your words, yearning. Very good display of full-hearted pain, if that makes any sense. |