"Listen, I'm turning over a new leaf. I'm becoming a lesbian. It'll save me money on birth control."

This is my most favorite and memorable line of all the fiction I've read on fictionpress... I love your story, the dialogue is so witty, and the prose is written really smoothly and with great exposition. I love your characters, they're so likeable and funny!

I love the fact that you created such a playful atmosphere and how heavy the UST was laid on. I've read and re-read this story like, what, five times? It is perfection.

Definitely one of favourites on fictionpress :) can't wait for the next 'The Harris Family Tree' installment. x

Well damn, that was the best and probably the funniest one shot I've ever read! Lol

Awww! Love it! So freaking cute and funny! I love the Hide or Die idea! Eek!

wow wow wow dis is ...have no words...! seriouslyyyy BANG ON ..i totally gone wid d sexual tension:P ;) so ya great job

Loved it! Thanks :)

Holy cow balls. That was simply amazing and if that didn't top sexual tension, I don't know what will. Basically I love love loved it!

Oh my god that was like the best one-shot I've read! I love the hide-and-seek game, that sounds like so much fun to do, especially if it's a tradition from something you've been doing since you were a nine-year old. Ahh the UST was nicely built up ;D I love how they made out on a building, and that was pretty genius of Charlie to distract her like that, and the phone move was suave. The gummy bear description of Charlie by Adelaide (I like your choice of name!) was cute :3 I want to play hide and seek now haha, (especially with a hot guy like Charlie) :)

i want a charlie all of my own! and love the idea of a giant hide and seek challenge :) love your stories!

Love this oneshot 3

As much as I would Really! Love! to read AnyThing At All you Ever write about Addles and Charlie (probably multiple times, because I actually just read this twice!) -they are funny and Hot and had The best interruptions- my favorite part that made me laugh out loud was this conversation:

**"So I've bet Justin fifty bucks that he will be
soaked by the end of the night,"... "I plan on
cheating, of course, so if I don't actually find him
you'll have to help me throw him in the fountain" ... "Gladly," I replied,...she snapped a few pictures of me... she made party pictures look
like they belonged in Time Magazine. Let's just
say the Dixie cup had never looked better. "I must chronicle everything" ...I must seize my chance
while I can. I think I might make a photo journal
out of this for class." "You are very odd," I told her, smiling. "Of all the
things to turn in…"... "This is far more interesting than any stupid sob story on the homeless or old people at the nursing always does shit like that, so I want to make sure my pictures are extra out there." "I think you're definitely going to manage that just fine." ... "Plus, it's a great opportunity for blackmail," she added, and took the gun with a grin. It was an evil grin, and in it I could see why Justin liked her so much... "Why does that sound so ominous?" I asked. "Because I have no mercy?" She suggested.**

So well-written! I totally loved it :)

That was...Amazing. I couldn't stop grinning!

DAT TENSION. lawd.

I think this might be my favorite one shot .. ever. The grammar and syntax and the way the dialogue flowed was beautiful, to be honest. The dialogue is very realistic, and you don't find that much on fp anymore, haha.

Someone else probably already pointed it out, but there's a typo where I think whole was supposed to be hole?

at - "It was my favorite restaurant, a cute little -whole- in the wall place with authentic Italian and a guy who plays the mandolin on weekends,"

I don't know if you check fp anymore, but I just wanted to say how much I loved this one shot! favorited.