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| DOLCEVITA 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseHoly, the sexual tension was definitely high! Even I felt it! Haha. I like it! Definitely added to my favorites! |
| kristenn987 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusethat was great! i loved the storyline! |
| becca 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! where can i get a Charlie? this was really good. can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
| Cecilyatheart 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThis story makes me SO HAPPY! God, I want to play that so freaking bad. Good story. |
| duckliy543 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abusethat was unbelivable. well odne. |
| troryfan3007 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseyay! it's brilliant, and wonderful and amazing! *favouriting* X Joanna X |
| artistic dreamer 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusethis was a loonngg one shot. but awesome though! i admire you for doing this skow challenge. having to incorporate everything into your story. and very creative. the sexual tension between them was so thick! you did an awesome job! |
| x3life 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseaw i loved this!! it was really cute =) |
| notebaggage 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseM, sexyy. LOADS of UST! I love the witty (and sexy) banter between them all. Fantastically written! Definitely favouriting! |
| TwinkleHeart 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseomg i love this story |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha. This wasn't lots and lots of UST, this was tons and bushels and gargantuan amounts of UST. A little dirty at times. XD Entertaining, original, and very very fun to read. Love this idea (how ever did you come up with it?) and this is an excellent SKoW Challenge Response (and oneshot). Yay to found.eventually for suggesting it; I'm off to add it to my c2 now. (: |
| aerogirl401 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseLoved it!! Funny situations, amazing sexual tension, and a hot guy to boot. You couldn't have done better! |
| cls81690 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHoly cow. That's freakin' amazing. I absolutely loved the writing style, the wittiness, the tension, and the hilarity. Is hilarity a word? Screw it, I'm claiming it as one. This is EXACTLY my favorite style of thing to read. Wowza. I saw the ad on the SKoW listserv and finally got around to reading past the Starbucks beginning. Fantastically done! It was entertaining and well-detailed. Wow. I'm absolutely blown away...not my usual reaction to oneshots! |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuse** that was AWESOME. Charlie seems so HOT. Haha the gummy bear theory? funny stuff. Addles is a cool name =] But I really like how you've written the whole oneshot cheers! xo. |
| claveldelpoeta 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI want Greg... lol, I know, weird... he's barely in the story but I tend to do that... I tend to get crushes on secondary character... but really, that licking of the finger and grabbing his balls, LMAO... I want him. Oh right, the review... It was EXCELLENT! It's so good I wish you'd make this one-shot into a longer story... I loved the characters and wish I could read more about them. |