Omg, you sent me into fits of stifled-laughter with this little bit of awesomeness: "You’re like a gummy bear – you’re cute, a little odd, and unbelievably delicious, and right now all I want to do is suck on your—“ . . . my family thinks I'm insane now. :) loved it!

hilarious...I loved it

I would have to say that this is the BEST one shot I have ever read. It was amazing and I loved it like you wouldn't even begin to imagine. Great work!

That was an awesome story. I swear, this site is like crack for 13 year old girls, and I'd thought I'd gotten over my addiction 3 years ago. Your story proved otherwise, single-handedly taking away 3 years of maturity from my brain. Or maybe it's just too good for this site?

Lol lol lol! I liked it very much! I pity gummy bears, they're so cute, it makes me sad to rip their heads off their little bodies! I prefer gummy snakes, lol!

Brilliant.

Wonderfully written. I loved the creative plot! Taking the hide-and-seek game to a grand scale. It sounds so frivolous and exciting, and it makes me want to take part in the game too. The sexual tension was fabulous! Absolutely brilliant! I really enjoyed reading this one.

I was really getting into this - your buildup was amazing; seriously, the chemistry between them was unbelievable. But I just felt like this ended...just like that. Didn't really expand into the potential it had; you had me, but then the chapter just stopped.

i just want to say thank you for writing this. i'm in love with this story! seriously yesterday i read it about 6 times and i keep on reading it again and again today. you managed to make this one-shot funny and sexy, and that's not something anyone could do. at first i thought i'd be bored with the background details, but you made them long enough to get into the story and short enough not to get bored tith them.

i really hope you write the squel soon.

Gaah, I absolutely loved this :)

Amazing job!

-Aria

I loved it! :D The idea was very original

I can see why you won the SKoW award :) Awesome job

This was so cute. And definitely had a lot of UST. I loved it. :)

-Katherine

Holy MAHN! Hahahaha! That was superb! LOVED IT! DEFINITELY one of my mostmostmostmostmostMOST favorite one-shots ever. :) Creative game and plot! I'd like to join them sometime too! ;) Hahahaha! Happy Writing! And if you haven't won already, I'm sure you will! LOL.

wow. this is going to my favorites!Ü