Wow...that was...filled with hell of a lot of sexual tension. I also loved how you personalized the requirements for the skow challenge. Seriously awesome. Haven't had an awesome read in quite a while. :P

Mother- you hit the jackpot with this one! Hot dang this is probably one of the most highly entertaining piece of ART that I have read for a LONG TIME (namely after lordironballs [check him OUT!]). Apart from some missing letters in certain words and grammatical errors, this is fo shiz the best UST piece I've ever read. Kudos to your imagination and the place! Good Lord...yes I do believe that I sound too much like a giggling schoolgirl fan but wtf right? I appreciate writers like you as much as a fat kid appreciates cake (and I sure do appreciate cake). You're on my list, babe (I'd say bitch but we don't know each other well) you RAWK MY SOCKS TO PLUTO!

Fucking incredible.

Awesome! I don't really read one-shots, they are too short for me but this one has quite a decent length. 'Decent' wouldn't fit for anything else about it. I'm at a loss of words right now...

It was amazing! Hot, through 10 thousand words.

Holy Toledo! That was quite possibly the most fantastic one-shot I've ever read (and trust me, I've read a lot). It was humorous, creative, and full of absolutely glorious sexual tension. Here are a few lines I particularly liked:

"My mother says it’s because of the glue, but I think she says that because she’s a kindergarten teacher and has to sniff it all day." - This just made me laugh out loud. Not quite sure why, but I loved it.

"I’ve been getting death threats on Facebook for like a week now." - A very well-placed pop-culture reference! Those can really add a lot to a story.

“Oh, I’m going to kill him. I’m going to rip him limb from limb. Possibly jump him. But definitely kill him.” - That was just awesome.

The competitiveness combined with the sexual frustration in the relationship between Adelaide and Charlie really made this story work well. Fantastic job!

Really awesome one-shot. I normally don't read one-shots but I really loved this. In all honesty, it wouldn't be hard at all to turn this into an acutally story. If you find the inspiration I would really love to see what you could do with this plot.

Definately awesome!

That was so good. Seriously. I was so happy by the end of this that i think i pulled a muscle in my cheek from smiling so much. Charlie ROCKED! Screw Adelaide, i wanted to do him myself! LoL. To create this much tension (especially of the sexual kind) in short story takes a great deal of talent. No word was wasted. I think you have a great thing here and i'm so lucky it was nominated for a SKOW award, otherwise i may never have found it! It's going straight to my faves, and just for the record, it has my vote. You should definitely be proud. I'll look out for more from you in the future.

LK1512

Absolutely brilliant! I loved it! Quite delicious too...like gummy bears.

Oh my! That was SO GOOD! I had this urge to check out the challenges for Skow, and so glad I did! Wow... I am not being very articulate right now because I honestly can't think of anything else to say besides random ramblings of greatness. Perhaps I have helped your ego a bit. As it should be.

Well, dude, you've got my vote for sure.

Forgive me-I usually write long-assed reviews, but I can't with this story because I'm utterly astounded. I've lost all feeling in my fingers, because I've been gripping my laptop for an hour while reading this.

I found only one minor error throughout the whole thing: Once that happens you have go to the top of the lawn by the fountain-"you have *to* go..."

Other than that, your characters were lovably awesome, the UST caused heart palpitations, and I'm seriously thinking about starting my own Annual Hide or Die Summer Challenge.

I believe a sequel is in order! I look forward to reading that and more of your work soon.

Best,

-McQuinn

I have not laughed this much in SO long. Thank you for writing this wonderfully hilarious story.

Oh, I loved this! :) The whole concept of Hide or Die - well, mostly how it evolved into a huge event, was just great! And of course, Adelaide and Charlie were sizzling. :D

Great work!

HAHA! That was hilarious and I would love to have a huge hide and seek game! It would be so fun!

gulistanlik

Fanfuckingtastic!

“He laughed. “Tease. What color underwear are you wearing?”

I let my voice drop back into sex goddess mode. “Who says I’m wearing underwear?””

I don't even know how, but that line made me laugh for so, SO long. And gosh, sexual tension, much? XP You fulfilled all the requirements, really.

Loved it, and dang. You make me wanna vote for you!