That was one of the best one shots I've read on fiction press! It was so cute and funny, gaaah :))

I think you more than met this prompt. Absolutely fantastic. I love everyone and everything in and about this. Fantastic job!

This is really great and really hot. :)

I had so much fun reading this! The opening was intriguing and the writing was well put together and very clear. You have a very elegant and clean writing style-nothing is confusing and everything fits perfectly into place. Plus I definitely had a good laugh reading it xp

hi! i really liked this story because 1) it's short. i have absolutely no patience to read through a long and draggy story and the pace of this story is very nice, not too fast, not too slow and i absolutely love the concept you've come up with for this story. it's really unique and i can't wait to see this in charlie's POV

I don't think it's possible for me to quite righteously express my love for this particular fic.

I think that this one shot has to be one of the best I have read on this site so far. I loved the amount of sexual tension between Charlie and Adelaide it just kept me wanting to read more about the two. There weren't any grammar errors which is a plus, overall great one shot. I loved it!

Loved it!

Really cute! And funny! I love the idea of that game! Sounds like something my frie ds and I would do... Anyway, loved it a lot!

School was killing me so I only got the time to review this now. Phew. I was literally rolling on the bed laughing about this. I cannot say anything except that it's great. Nyah nyah ;p

Well...you got the UST part down.

Haha, this was great. It was also v. nostalgic! I hate summer but it's times like these that make it tolerable. Thanks for posting!

wow, Charlie. what a dick move. I wouldn't like it if anyone tricked me like that, mainly because I wouldn't do it to someone I trust. (then again, if you want to win, yeah, I guess I would. lol... but I guess my anger had something to do with him and Adelaide getting it on earlier, and suddenly being told I lost while on a high. yep. utter despair hahah)

and gosh, Erin. very annoyingly (sweet) to help out Charlie. but then her constant help reminded me of the time I was in 6th or 7th grade, and I told a classmate (whom I really trusted) that I liked his best friend, and the next day he told him. needless to say, I freaked out. not only did the guy I liked liked me, I just wanted to like him one-sidedly and not date. LOL.

So creative and clever! I love cleverness, so I was just eating it all up with a cheesy grin on my face. Very well written.

Wow, this oneshot is AMAZING!

I love how original it is. I mean, hide and go seek? Priceless. The Hide or Die summer challenge sounds so fun and I wish my friends and I did something like that...especially if it involved a Charlie. ;)

I loved every bit of this. The pent up sexual tension was hilarious and all of your characters are fantastic. I like how this was so different from everything else on fictionpress.

I feel like this review is really dumb and repetitive, so I'll just stop it there. But I really did love this! Good job! :)

Wow, this was such a pleasure to read. Very original and quite humorous. Thank you for writing this.