Cool story! :) I like how it's written, and the plot is nice.

LOVED everything. This story is just too fun! Loved Addles, loved her name, loved her and Erin, and of course, loved how forward Charlie was. Mm mm m.

definitely love unresolved sexual tensions! it's awesome and a bit sadistic and cute and i totally adore those moments! ahaha

I love the characters and the plot and generally everything. i love how hide and seek became an ultimate battle of sexes which i would have definitely joined if given the chance. hehe. and i surely love the wicked, sexy, beautiful and totally hot Harris family genes! they make life so exciting. i wish i have a Charlie in my pocket...

love it! awesome! funny and definitely a wonderful read. good job!

i am so lovin you dear author!

Wow. When you said there was going to be lots of sexual attraction and tension...you weren't kidding. :D Charlie and Addles are so cute together. And Charlie sounsd like such a stud. I want my own Charlie. Great writing. Its always fun to read about a good prank war.

Oh, I loved it.

I love this oneshot. It's hilarious and crazy. Crazy good! XD

The idea of the annual hide or die summer challenge is awesome.

LOL! HAHAHAHA! This was the most funnest, funniest and sexual tension-filled one shots I've ever read so far! You made me laugh. You really did. ;D

Ronnie

Oh my gosh, this story is so awesome. I love Charlie and Adelaide. At first, I thought she was going to get with the cashier. Dude, Charlie sounds so hot. You are such a great writer and make the characters seem so loveable and fun to read. Also, I want to say that I LOVE GUMMY BEARS. And, after reading this, I so would want to have an annual hide or die summer challenge.

That was hilariously awesome! I love this story, it made me laugh the entire time I was reading it. Your characters are all so real. Thanks for keeping me entertained!

Liz

That awesome one shot was pure genius.

This One-Shot is incredible, it has to be one of the best that I've read so far. It's amazing the amount of sexual tension there is between the two character. There isn't any grammar errors which simmply makes the story more enjoyable. One of the things I would have liked to read as a flashback would have been Charlie's and Adelaide's first kiss. Other than that all I have to say amazing.

wow! the tension between the two main character's was intense! You can always do the best one-shots, I always love them! I think this one is my favourite from you, it had just enough humour to make me laugh, and just enough tension to make me wish that the story would end just so the characters could get together!

You may want to consider making this a full story and not just a one-shot. I think if you did flashbacks between the previous challenges and such you'd be able to draw out the story and add more detail.

Keep on churning out one-shots! You've got a real talent :)

I remember this story!

I've been looking for good stories to read for a while now.

I came across this one again and decided to read it again cause it was so awesome like the first time )

I LOVE

Super, super cute! :) I love it! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl